Your Home (Act 1, Scene 8)

Soviet-style mural of a hand reaching for a shining heart

Act 1, Scene 8

FEDE

Meli carried inside her head a mansion repurposed into an art studio/museum. The gold Art Deco accents of the architecture had been painted black, the chandelier and candelabra cast out, most of the furniture covered in sheets and abandoned in the kitchen. All these steps were done to allow room for the paintings, statues and other pieces that I’m not sure how I could describe. Furthermore, the whole layout and style of the art got rearranged about every time I got in there.

I can’t help but highlight in my notes that an absurd quantity of the pieces were nudes. I’ve never been a prude, but Jesus, this girl was passionate about anatomy.

She laughed in that abundant and brilliant way she did at my vague descriptions of the place and proceeded to destroy me with a wink.

Meli was curious if the place could be considered “livable”, you know if there was running water, electricity, a bed. I confirmed that it was and she alleged the same about my head.

Then she got an idea.

Turns out she’d spoken with Roberta, my roommate that apparently knew Meli just as every regiomontano knows each other. Roberta had given her a good impression of me as a living companion and also babbled that soon I’d find myself with nowhere to sleep.

Meli told me: “You see, Fede, I’m currently banished from my home until the end of the millenium, and so I believe we are at the precipice of a truly unique business arrangement.”

I thought it would be risky. Things with Roberta were different, I loved her like a friend and she never believed me that I was heterosexual. There was no tension, in other words.

But I knew there would be with Meli.

I said yes to her hoping that it would be the correct kind of tension.

            END OF SCENE


One response to “Your Home (Act 1, Scene 8)”

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    Anonymous

    I had a stronger sense of what Meli’s head looked like, the sheet-covered furniture and candleabra were strong images for me. The heavy presence of the classic nudes would be more powerful (for me) if you walked me into them just a bit more slowly…like, maybe if there were more descriptions of the artworks as both paintings and sculptures seperately, like maybe first noticing the paintings on the walls and then the sculptures spread out amongst the sheet-covered furniture, and then describe one or some of the sculptures (texture, the stance, the gaze, body type, did one make Fede blush or something, and maybe reminded him that he hoped for the type of tension with Muri mentioned at the conclusion?). I think that you have very clear images in your mind of what these places look like, so I will always push you towards being more descriptive! These are just suggestions, by the way…I hope that is what you were looking for here…

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